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Post by BloodBath on May 22, 2005 16:58:11 GMT -5
More to come soon.
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Post by blastoff on May 22, 2005 17:23:26 GMT -5
Looks good. Some suggestions: 1st pic: There's a spelling mistake There are two "you" at the end of the dialogue. 2nd pic: The map looks good, but, those "pillars" of stone... You can't notice where the actual top of the pillars end. If you could modify that by adding a little brown or black borderline to them.
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Post by LostInGeneral on May 23, 2005 5:04:13 GMT -5
Dialogue issues in the first pic:
- It would be more appropriate to use, "Kakarot, you fool!" in place of "Kakarot! You fool,..."
- If you choose to leave it as is, then You is not to be capitalized after fool.
- Green shouldn't be capitalized.
- The word "this" after the comma should not be capitalized.
- The contraction "you're" should not be used in that context. The proper word is "your".
- There are two "you"'s.
Dialogue issues in the second pic:
- In the context it is used, the word "Earth" should be capitalized.
- It would make more sense to use "would" instead of "wouldn't".
Aaand, that's it. Hope that helps.
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Post by BloodBath on May 23, 2005 10:34:14 GMT -5
dance with up with all those spelling answers! I don't give a damn about them, Im here for Comments and Critics about the game!
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Post by LostInGeneral on May 23, 2005 14:11:43 GMT -5
-_-
What can I say about the game when I've only been shown four screenshots?
That's not logical.
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Post by Pyroshock on May 23, 2005 19:11:41 GMT -5
f**k up with all those spelling answers! I don't give a damn about them, Im here for Comments and Critics about the game! Spelling issues is criticism.
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Post by SSJ4ChibiTrunks on May 24, 2005 8:21:18 GMT -5
You Can't Rate A Game With Only Some Screenshots Lessons(YCRAGWOSSL) Spelling Lessons In Only Four Years (SLIOFY) Some clubs you might want to join
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Post by LostInGeneral on May 24, 2005 17:31:22 GMT -5
Actually, that would be SLIOFY...
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Post by SSJ4ChibiTrunks on May 27, 2005 9:07:42 GMT -5
Well... that's what it says, right ;D
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Post by blastoff on May 27, 2005 12:06:53 GMT -5
lol
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Post by LostInGeneral on May 27, 2005 20:42:43 GMT -5
Well, yes, after you edited it...
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Post by SSJ4ChibiTrunks on May 28, 2005 10:30:26 GMT -5
No, it's your mistake.
You looked to early!
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Post by mysticsaiyan on May 28, 2005 10:38:35 GMT -5
I dislike your Radtiz faceset
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Post by Pyroshock on May 28, 2005 15:22:28 GMT -5
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Post by Demoneyes on May 28, 2005 16:03:15 GMT -5
Hehehehe......I forgot about that!
Well, there isn't much you can do, really.
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