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Post by XxCloudxX on Mar 20, 2005 12:36:42 GMT -5
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Post by Pyroshock on Mar 20, 2005 13:07:53 GMT -5
Haha! BoD has been re-mastered! ;D
Only three *little* things need fixing.
1. Why did Raditz's FaceSet turn back to faded? 2. I'm pretty sure there's no "c" in "Kakarot." 3. In text for a video game, you never used the number unless you're literally meaning the number itself. So it would be "you two" instead of "you 2." But, "Level 5" is right.
So when are you gonna let me have another shot at BoD? If I can that is...
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Post by XxCloudxX on Mar 20, 2005 13:39:45 GMT -5
"1. Why did Raditz's FaceSet turn back to faded? 2. I'm pretty sure there's no "c" in "Kakarot." 3. In text for a video game, you never used the number unless you're literally meaning the number itself. So it would be "you two" instead of "you 2." But, "Level 5" is right. "
1. He disappeared, so you couldn't see him. 2. In my manga it is "Kackarot" 3. That doesn't apply to video games, that applies to books (literature).
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Post by Pyroshock on Mar 20, 2005 13:47:37 GMT -5
1. But you already know what he looks like. That's just my opinion.
2. OK.
3. And videogame text, it technically is literature, and saying two instead of 2 is more formal. Check any professionally made video game for "you 2 better go" and you will find none, you will probably find one that says "you two," but not "you 2."
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Post by SSJ4ChibiTrunks on Mar 20, 2005 15:25:56 GMT -5
Cool screens, but man, you gotta take spelling-lessons It is kakarot, NOT Kackarot...Everyone knows that you HAVE to use two instead of 2, if you leavwe it like this, many comments reuinion? sounds like re-union ... .... And I still think yajirobe isnt a farmer
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Post by XxCloudxX on Mar 20, 2005 17:43:31 GMT -5
Yajarobi isn't a farmer...
If everyone think it's "Kakarot", who cares? I'll go by the manga, not the dubbed episodes...
Also, I should take spelling lessons? When you work as fast as I do mistakes are unstoppable.
You should try making a game yourself, you'll get critisized much more than I do...
By the way, nice sig...
Also, here's a spelling lesson for YOU: ------------------------------------ Cool screens, but man, you have to take spelling lessons.
It's Kakarot, NOT Kackarot, Everyone knows that.
You HAVE to use two instead of 2, if you leave it like THAT, many comments.
"The above sentance after the comma makes no sense what so ever"
Reuinion? Sounds like re-union ...
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And I still think Yajirobe isn't a farmer.
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Post by Pyroshock on Mar 20, 2005 17:50:21 GMT -5
More.
1.You put "Master Rosh's". Add that i in there. 2. In the part explaining how to move, don't make the commas yellow, and put a comma after "Down." 3. Only make "you'd better find Gohan" yellow, not the part right before it.
Oh yeah, you didn't complete more than us at all. You just showed more. And we didn't do all the "Find Gohan" stuff. We went straight to Master Roshi's island when Goku appeared, then had him find Roshi's magazine (hidden a bit more than LoG1), then Raditz come. Everything was pretty much dead-on with the saga, text-wise atleast. The cutscenes were pretty much the same as with the saga, except for Raditz shooting the farmer with a beam (which you complained about).
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Post by XxCloudxX on Mar 20, 2005 17:53:47 GMT -5
Thanks, but no thanks, I don't need advice from anyone but people actually working on the game.
Also, Pyro, I'd like you to release your version of the Saiyan Saga, and I'll relase mine. Using the same battle system, ofcourse, but I just want the players to choose which one they like better.
Since you are so far in it, right?
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Post by XxCloudxX on Mar 20, 2005 17:57:49 GMT -5
I'm also done with the meet-up...
Also, there's a difference between "further" and "more gameplay".
I highly doubt your version packs more gameplay and I definately know it doesn't stick to the story as well as it should be.
Not to brag, but every single text you see in the screen shots is actually spoken in the first episode of the show.
Also, half of the things in your demo were my ideas that you recreated anyway, which is why I have to do things differently now, which stick more to the show anyway.
Keep in mind the comments posted by the Picceta Forum's members from your guys' version:
"xD I knew they where crap from the start, even their work was crap. I don't see why you recruited them in the beginning."
"Sad son of b*****s! Too lazy to do anything...... Well, they are right count on yourself and maybe someone will be kind enough to actually help you."
"Just thinking of working with them gives me the chills."
"You should really kick them Cloud, they are going to be the downfall of BOD...
I've seen your work compared to theirs and the differences are apparent they can't even get there own ideas!!!!!"
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Post by SSJ4_Goten on Mar 20, 2005 18:03:53 GMT -5
cool screens ^_^
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dont wory ppl, he will probably fix the mistakes in the future. but still, sweet screens ^_^
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Post by Pyroshock on Mar 20, 2005 18:26:07 GMT -5
Cloud is right, there is a difference between more gameplay and a longer game. Right now our start of it was completley cutscene save a couple seconds of finding Roshi's magazine.
Since you started again on BoD again Cloud, I deleted my version thinking we were all gonna go with what you've started. And we didn't "steal" your ideas, you told us to re-create what you've started and work with it farther on.
And tell the dude that said I was to lazy to do anything that he should try and get a f**king life that's not sitting infront of his computer all day. Some people are in sports leagues, such as playing football. They don't have all the time in the world to work on a game.
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Post by XxCloudxX on Mar 20, 2005 19:48:28 GMT -5
Recreate as in re-do. Not the exact same thing...
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Post by Pyroshock on Mar 20, 2005 19:55:34 GMT -5
Yea, re-doing it. It wasn't exactly the same. Such as the panorama wasn't the same, the pod didn't have flames, and a few more things. *EDIT*: Those are comments from Picceta's forum members? I searched the forum and didn't see any topics about BoD. *EDIT2*: I forgot to give you this awhile ago. This is if you're still going to make a title screen for BoD:
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Post by XxCloudxX on Mar 21, 2005 6:35:14 GMT -5
Nicely done. We'll probably find a better picture for the background, but this will do for now.
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Post by blastoff on Mar 21, 2005 11:06:41 GMT -5
I'd have to agree with Pyro and So-nox.
If you're doing something you like, you try to do it as perfectly as possible. Yeah, soome mistakes can happen, we aren't perfect, but please, fix them.
Kakarot, not "Kackarot".It was Kakarot in the original manga too, not only the show. Add an "I" to Master Rosh's. Use "You two", and not "You 2". It's "reunion", not "reuinion".
Also.....
You HAVE to use two instead of 2, if you leave it like THAT, many comments.
"The above sentance after the comma makes no sense what so ever"
Umm, it does make sense. With "many comments", he meant that many people would say things about it.Maybe bad comments, maybe good ones, maybe even neutral.
And, BTW, the name of the people when talking(Chi-Chi for example), are all in mayus, like "CHI CHI". Maybe you should reconsider that, and do it like "Chi Chi".
It looks better.
And about we deciding which part is better, either yours or Pyro's and Sanji's, I don't have a problem. We'll see then. That's if you do it, of course(since Pyro said he deleted it cause of you coming back and doing it, I guess that won't happen).
lol
Maybe I wrote a bit too much.
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