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Post by Wankster on Jul 4, 2005 20:36:41 GMT -5
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Post by SSJ4ChibiTrunks on Jul 5, 2005 3:45:58 GMT -5
Nice to see you back here  Game looks cool, but there are some (LAAAAME) spellingmistakes... The screen where krillin is scared, he says "Goku where are you know I hate to be brave without you." There must be 2 times "you" in it  |
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Post by Wankster on Jul 5, 2005 11:49:45 GMT -5
LOL i know i allready changed the whole thing  |
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Post by SSJ4ChibiTrunks on Jul 5, 2005 12:03:14 GMT -5
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Post by blastoff on Jul 5, 2005 12:08:53 GMT -5
Hi again Wanks. Some fixing ;D Put names with capital letters(like Master Roshie).Same with the "I" in the Krillin's pic mentioned by Chibi. Second, your Shen-Ron looks a bit.......rare Also, if you're telling the Saiyan Saga, I think Roshie already saw Shen-Ron by then. I don't think he'd be taht surprised. Third, in the "Goodluck bulma" pic, separate the "Good" and "Luck", and put Bulma with a capital letter. Foruth, in the "It looks like Goku is joining us soon"...I think it should be "It looks like Goku will be joining us soon". Fifth, in the Nappa and Vegeta pick, the "Ahh", and the rest should be separated with some exclamation marks.Also, put "Makes you" in the middle.Like this: "Ahh !! Destroying those humans really makes you feel good !" Sixth, where Krillin says "Yea Kami trained us!", put a comma in there, as well as changing the "a" of "Yea" for an "s", or put "Yeah" with the "h". Seventh, in the pic with Vegeta mentioning the Saibaman, "saibaman" should be in caps.(like I put it before) Last one, in the "Chaut-Su" one...That's just lame.... It's either Chaot-Zu, or Chaozu.(use the first one) Also, I don't like your face sets that much... |
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Post by Wankster on Jul 5, 2005 12:48:04 GMT -5
lol thnx for the critics matis sad to say i dont give a damn about the grammers lol im making this the way im doing it now.. be happy u understand what i mean lol about the facesets those are lsw shaded lol and i like them ill be showing more screens soon since there is nothing to do around here |
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Post by blastoff on Jul 6, 2005 12:28:01 GMT -5
Well, I prefer seeing good grammar, but, meh, do what you want. It's your game after all. I was just trying to give you help to make more people like it. Atleast change the Chaut-Su one... And your facesets don't actually look like the LSW ones...  Maybe it's just me.... And...please, do something about the "Eternal Dragon"....*coughShen-Roncough* |
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Post by Wankster on Jul 6, 2005 13:08:31 GMT -5
lol ok since u asked so nice ill do it
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Post by blastoff on Jul 6, 2005 17:45:48 GMT -5
Yay ;D
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Post by Pyroshock on Jul 7, 2005 18:30:11 GMT -5
Matis...LSW facesets are the good ones...
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Post by blastoff on Jul 8, 2005 12:25:18 GMT -5
What do you mean by the good ones ? Better than, say the Log series ones ? Or better than the ones Wanks uses ?  And I haven't played LSW in a long time, so, maybe, they did look like this. But I know they could be way better.  |
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Post by Pyroshock on Jul 9, 2005 13:27:44 GMT -5
The facesets pretty much EVERYONE making a DBZ game uses are re-colored and shaded LSW facesets, since LSW's sprites and stuff could only have like 3 colors.
*SIDENOTE*: Eeg! The page-stretching!
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Post by Demoneyes on Jul 11, 2005 11:37:13 GMT -5
Ack! He's right!
ALso, the Saibaman sprite is...weird.
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DarkGoten
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Post by DarkGoten on Aug 1, 2005 1:13:03 GMT -5
Good job wankster but I have a better crater as a charset and it works come on msn and i'll give it to ya.
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